Fifty-fifty in the mind
He walks in nimbly, with a marksheet he wants to hide
From the loving parents who say he is their pride.
Fifty-fifty in the kid’s mind: to admit failure, or simply lie
And drown deeper in his guilt as each night passes by?
A tiny morsel in her mouth, and two bellies to feed,
She faces a dilemma between love and greed,
Fifty-fifty in the cat’s mind: save it for her kitten, or have her fill
And let the young one sleep hungry in the December chill?
A plump young lady eyes a succulent chocolate slab
That impedes her will to fight her ugly flab.
Fifty-fifty in her mind: to resist, or to surrender
And shift her slimming deadline to another date on her calendar?
Hoping for his maiden win, he hits the shot of his last set,
And the ball stops for a split second as it hits the tip of the net.
Fifty-fifty in the player’s mind: Will today be his game,
Or will he yet again return, hanging his head in shame?
The penniless, abandoned old man holds a prescription slip,
There’s a car at the crossroad that might offer him a tip.
Fifty-fifty in his mind: stoop down and beg, or stand tall and firm,
No matter if his illness makes him scream and squirm?
With a prayer on his lips and a racing heartbeat,
He sees her approach him, and he gets cold feet.
Fifty-fifty in the lover’s mind: Will she hold his hand and smile,
Or will she walk far away, far, many a mile?
8 comments:
Hi Nishant,
Ur poem is very close to life....It represents the dilemma of a common man in his day to day life in a great fashion.I just loved it. Would love to read your book too..please let me know if I can get it in Pune.
wow..very thoughtful!liked the fifty-fifty concept as well:)
Came from the article on you on sparsh, and I am not disappointed:)
this is simply brilliant!
He wrote with vigour and with thirsty anticipation...
But wondered if this blog post would live upto expectation...
And then he saw them comments pouring in,
His words were alive, they scored another win...
Bloggie man, this ain't no fifty-fifty, a perfect 100 this,
You're a plotster, a wordsmith, a clear wiz!
Saabu-babu,
I have had the opportunity to read your work from b-school onwards. I have seen them mature and evolve from plain 'writing' to 'concepts'.
50-50 is a good specimen of just that. It is a very good read - congratulations!
so beautifully...put...luvd the way you have described the dilemma.
a very deep observer of life...
great read
Many thanks,Jazz! Those were kind compliments..thanks all of you who've liked my work :) it's inspiring indeed...sorry I don't know how to individually reply here...i am a bit new to this blog world :(
fifty- fifty in my mind, is it a master-piece or a piece by a master?
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